June 7th prompt: Where you are: plants/flowers/trees or any growing things.

Posted on by under Haiku, NaHaiWriMo - June 2012

I listened to a person hammering this morning. The hammering was outdoors, I indoors. I have written this many times … many. Rewriting for me is in part … elimination of unnecessary words.

calm morning trees neighbor hammering – old wood

One thought on “June 7th prompt: Where you are: plants/flowers/trees or any growing things.”

  1. No unnecessary words there – ably done….even the hammering sounds peaceful in this haiku. Here we have a demented neighborhood woodpecker who loves to hammer on the neighbor’s tin roof……

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