I listened to a person hammering this morning. The hammering was outdoors, I indoors. I have written this many times … many. Rewriting for me is in part … elimination of unnecessary words.
calm morning trees neighbor hammering – old wood
I listened to a person hammering this morning. The hammering was outdoors, I indoors. I have written this many times … many. Rewriting for me is in part … elimination of unnecessary words.
calm morning trees neighbor hammering – old wood
No unnecessary words there – ably done….even the hammering sounds peaceful in this haiku. Here we have a demented neighborhood woodpecker who loves to hammer on the neighbor’s tin roof……